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School rules
I think school rules is a kind of system which teaches us self- discipline. Rules help teachers and make our life better.
For example , we mustnt bully other children or drink fizzy drinks or eat sweets in the classroom. There are many students or parents who think that rules at schoolare  very strict. But I think they are all right . Firstly , I thinkour school is trying to teach us that punctuality is very important both at school and in social life . Punctuality helps us a lot : it is a good manner and useful part of etiquette .
Secondly I think our school is trying to tell us that we always need tobe clean and tidy. It is very good because a dress code is required at work in many places.
In conclusion , I think it isntnecessary to change our school rules because we can learn  somany things at school that will help us in our life . So we must use all these rules so as to be  prepared for independent life .