Нужно рассказать про распорядок своего дня с понедельника по неделю, помогите плиз

On Monday I usually go to my college at 8.30 oclock. When I go there I listen to music and dance like a Mikle Jackson. When my classes finishes I go home and eat my meal. Then I do my homework. At the afternoon I like o chat with m classmates and friends and listening to music. After that I have my dinner. At about eight oclock I like to play videogames. At eleven oclock I go to bed and sleep as a baby cause Im so tired.
On Tuesday go to my college at 8.30 oclock and dont listen to music because Im zombie. Then as usually I have my classes and go home to eat meal. I do my homework at six oclock and listening to music. I often want to go out with my friends, but I have no them ( or  Im too lazy to stand up and do something) and I have lunch. Then I chat with my friends and watching a serial. At twelwe oclock I go to sleep.
//Писать продолжение? Или это плохое сочинение?